As the maid snatched the doll from her daughter’s hand and handed her a broom.
Childhood knew its time was up.
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As the maid snatched the doll from her daughter’s hand and handed her a broom.
Childhood knew its time was up.
shivashishspeaks 
I like your poem! I think these days children are not enjoying their childhood! There is too much pressure from society for them to grow up and meet deadlines (e.g., kindergarten homework) as well as parental expectations such as thinking that a small child can control their emotions the same way adults can. You will find that a lot of young children suffer from anxiety because they can’t cope with the pace.
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Very true
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So sad when we became adults. Be a children is nice. 🙂
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Yes, childhood for sure the best period of life but that we find in the adulthood . We will never get the true essence of childhood unless we grow mature.
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Heart breakingly deep. Your one sentence has summed up a centuries old reality.
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Great thought behind the short story..
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Thanks
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This has a wonderful image in such a short amount of time.!
-Author S
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Thanks
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You’re welcome!
-Author S
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Nice and beautiful
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Thanks you for visiting my blog post
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Love your concise attack! Will follow.
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Now that was not nice of the maid.. 🙂 It opens up a whole chapter of thoughts.. Why was the maid not using the broom?.. Was the child being bullied to do her work? :-D..
Happy New Year to you 🙂
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Nice perspective
Same to you
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🙂
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Sad yet true.. Alas,the harsh realities of life..
You write so well..
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True
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You have conveyed such a harsh reality of some children in just a single sentence. Kudos!!
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I felt so sad for the child that had to grow up so quickly 😥
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nice story!!
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I had to chuckle at that one! LOL!!! Right to the point! Loved it 🙂
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Whoah that was deep for that child! Great story there!
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A harsh reality for that child.
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True
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It’s heart wrenching for sure. Your short story is depicting a picture of disparity spread across the world perhaps. Not every child is fortunate enough to enjoy childhood.
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True
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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This reminded me of my mom’s story, she grew up during the 1930’s and was adopted by a couple in order to serve as their maid. It is astounding the stories women have.
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Ya
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Great!
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Ah yes. Very nicely put shivashishspeaks!
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Thanks
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