Watching the dead being put to the flames as their kin wailed for them ,he knew death is what makes life worth living.
He thought of killing himself as he was the lost emperor who had to see the death of his people by crooks, but couldn’t move and felt paralysed.Then he saw two burly man lifting others and carrying towards them towards the end of the battleground and throwing them near the carcasses of his brothers and people. They lifted up the bodies of his alive kinsman and threw them into the furnace.
His cries beseeched and felt like cutting his throat down .
His armour was lying on the dust and he could see his country men lynched by the new prince. His empire’s flag was in flames ,the faithful hovering clouds casted their spell and a heavy downpour hit the stealth and sacred soil.
This was the same soil which witnessed the family blooming generations but now the eye witness to encounter the failure.
He couldnt sense his lower half body but only red skies and grounds. He pressed his eyes hard and finally the colour of sky and everything changed from red to black.
Wonderfully portrayed…the agony of loss
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Oh my! There is a lot happening here. Words of destruction, loss, pain. death, flames all wonderfully crafted to take us to that place and that moment.
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Wow great words and so very feeble r we as humans. No power at all. Great poem
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Things sure could go quite the other way around.. No matter what. 🙂
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Interesting piece … how powerless we can be …
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